The polaroid camera doesn't have anywhere else to go so it just sits on my desk. Until you see that my little carpet paradise is surrounded by pile of mess. My room has an area where I keep drawing and pictures, an area for me to keep my collections. No matter what the season, my bed covers always match my room and it's theme. Good story I enjoyed reading it. In somebody's room there has to be furniture and in my room furniture plays a major part because without furniture I wouldn't like it. My floor isnt actually that colorful but because there are heaps of clothes everywhere you cant tell how boring colour is. you could add a bit more information. On top of my cubby hole shelves I have got different coloured cups filled with different kinds of pens and pencils, mostly pencils. As you take a small tentative step through my bedroom door, the first thing you shall see is my old, wooden, glory box, that looks as though it has seen many times, both good and bad. My bedroom, my bedroom is like my very own house all to me, no-one is allowed in without permission except the cat and dog (mainly the cat). My layout, I think the layout of my room is perfect because my cabin bed, like the top half of of a bunk bed, is at the far end and looking over the entire room, apart from what's underneath it. Now another thing about my room is that it is never clean well unless mum cleans it but there's always something on the ground like a lunch box or cloths mostly cloths. It is a king single with 2 gold pillows and a gold king double size blanket, with the window next to it, so my bed and my pillows get soaked and thats always a laugh in my house for some reason. In my family you don't get much down time, from playing sport to hanging with friends, so it's good to do nothing. My bedroom is a medium size which I think fits everything in nicely. I love my room because you can just sit and read and just play. I like my room because of the rugged and unique feel it gives off and all the furniture and accessories. By Will Hayden. Then there's my desk covered in books, pens and rubbish along with my PJs and sports gear spread everywhere . I have fairy lights that are pink and gold, my desk is blue while my chair is a lime green. I am going to take you on a virtual trip around my room. My parents make me keep it tidy for good habits. You have elaborated on your ideas and have given the reader evidence why it is like that. The reason why my room is my room is because the wallpaper, the wallpaper is nicely placed in cool spots. It has a very spacious drawer that pulls out from underneath. There are lots of accessories in the room. An excellent description of your room Meg. 8. as rough as a cob. My bedroom is the best place in the house because of the way that it gets the warmth of the sun, the way that it has my favorite colour as a feature wall and because everyone in my family is jealous of it. Also my room is full of stuff to have fun with but my favorite thing to do is make cool trickshot area so I can record them and post them on to my YouTube channel. In total I have 9 hats that make my room stand out and the brands on many are monster energy, Billabong e.t.c. One child might be working on a project on the floor, another one jumping on the couch, and another crying in the bedroom. It was great because I could visualise some things about what it would look like. Under this window is my computer desk with a small draw and a slot for a keyboard giving a nice place to work. William I liked your descriptive words and the structure of your paragraphs. In my bedroom I have a big abstract photo of mountains hanging above my head. 4. The second one is abstract art that I made about a year ago when I was bored, and the third one is a tree with a swing, I made it when I was year 6 and I entered it into the amp show and I got 2nd. (Her eyes were beautiful.) The sun shines through my room during the day and makes my room look light. MY BEDROOM My bed. On the door it has my name (Will) and other things I made in hard materials. Try next time to make some of your objects more descriptive and not just the colours. When you walk in, on the left is a window and a desk, straight forward is a gigantic, wide window and to the right is my bed, wardrobe and heater. Islas Bedroom Description But there are disadvantages to having a small room. Every morning I need to make sure my bed is neat and tidy. Will someone help me solve the following problem. I wouldnt say that I have a colour theme in my room but if I had to say what colours stood out to me I would say all shades of blue, pink and green. A retreat is usually thought of as somewhere thats relaxing and calm. I like the constant use of adjectives, it helps me visualise the colours. My room is filled with colours I love like yellow, green and BLUE. Although there are many flaws in my room, Im still tolerating them. 9 years ago. I love my room and everyone loves their room but me living in newly renovated garage is great but has some downsides to it. You have some great ideas and I can get a really good visualisation of your room. If you walk into my room and look to the left you will see my bed and bedside cabinet, look to the far left corner and you will see my drums, then look to the far right corner is my dresser with all my old toys on top, and some lego technic then beside that is my desk/bookshelf and if you glance at the floor you will see the mess. Posters are another thing people have in their room, in my room I have one poster of a 3D of a coral reef. My blinds are a creamy, white colour that go all the way to the floor. I believe this because my bright orange feature wall attracts the daylight sun and all of the furniture is either new or has had a splash of paint to make it look fresh. you also need to indent your paragraphs. It also has another mattress underneath that has wheels on it. My room does not have a lot of furniture in it but the favorite part of my room does and that is my desk it has two skinny shelves next to it. I really enjoyed reading your piece of writing. At first I was a little surprised of the state of my bedroom, my wall decorations all still hanging up all except for one little photo. There is also a big built in wardrobe which has heaps of space in it ( where I chuck all my stuff in). Your spelling was pretty good. The colors that are used are light sea blue, grey and black. It has a dark theme and it has black sheets and gray covers. The other decoration in bedroom is my average size mirror which has lots of writing on it so I can remember what I need to do. The laws don't apply to my imagination except for the time to clean your room law. Then a little bit more right you will see a king size bed with a star wars duvay cover and black pillows. But good over all, Shadyn this is an accurate explanation of your teenage boy's bedroom. When my siblings come in they make a lot of noise so they get sent to their own room. There's pillows and rugs lying among my room, worn out posters and books stuffed in my wardrobe. Colors are a big part in my bedroom because the colors describe who I am and what my personality is like because I am a person who prefers darker colors. now I am going to move on to the style. Very detailed story and I loved the descriptive vocabulary you used in it (words like alcove). I have food wrappers on the floor beside my bed. One time I bounced a ping pong ball over my bed and landed then bounced off the floor and landed in the cup it was insane. Have you ever walked into someones living room and its felt like you walked into a move theater? I deposit myself there to snuggle up with a book, stroke my darling cat or simply sit on my bed, daydreaming, soaking up the sacred silence. Sometimes I play music from my bluetooth speaker and my brother comes in and screams and dances along to the music. I am happy that I have a couch in my room it helps my back I dont know how but it does, sometimes it's easy to fall asleep on it after a long day of work. Then the colour of the furniture from a blue to a lighter colour. My desk is white with a long blue draw that matches my blue wall. Light, open, spacious and its mine. I enjoyed the comparison you made between the mess and cleanliness. 4+, Nice work describing your room. On my shelf there are wooden airplanes that I have designed and made with my granddad that can tell you I like woodwork. I like how you used brackets and capital letters to make words stand out, Your Spelling is good Molly. Next to that rug is my bean bag which is blue with a flame on it which is also blue. 5. WILL HS BEDROOM The rest of the walls are a nice white color and it goes with the furniture that is against it. Under my bed I throw just about everything down there like sport gear and clothes I can't be bothered putting away. The theme of my bedroom is simply my favourite things. There are multi-coloured paper butterflies scattered all over the pale purple walls, swarming in corners and perching on the edges of family photographs. I also have surfing posters around the room of surfers that I admire and aspire to be like someday. Just remember we are moving your room soon. The carpet a deep chocolate brown to complement a pure white set of draws. You might go to a spa retreat or meditation retreat to escape from the world and get some relaxation. The layout is sort of a P shape without the hole. Harriets Bedroom No i have to go and clean up my room. Hopefully we will get you some colour in your room soon. The floor in my room is medium sized. My mini drawers has three drawers on top of each other with the middle one being slightly longer than the others. You were very descriptive when it came to what you liked about your room and what you didn't like. Your writing paints a picture in the readers mind and leaves them feeling like they actually just physically walked around it! It holds over 40 books as well as countless keepsakes, wires and old toys. My room has a fresh air smell and, in the morning you can hear the birds chirping outside, if you were to walk into my room it would be clean and tidy just the way I like it. to the right of that is a small toy box filled to the brim and next to it there is a big wardrobe that I never use. My wardrobe layout has all my shoes which i only have two pairs, hanging up are all my nice clothes. I have no clothes draws sitting around in my room because my wardrobe is large enough to store everything in. My bedside table is black with sticker brands covering them. My bed sits in the very middle of the room, while my large dresser, containing all of my clothes, is tucked in beside it. There are special items in my bedroom that cost a lot of money and one of those accessories are my Hats . There are two mirrors in the room the one im going to describe is the one connected to a table in my room. It is the most modern part of my entire house because it has recently been renovated from the garage that was never used. In my room we have really ugly wall paper, it is green and white, but ugly green. I try make my room a beach theme because I love going to the beach. You might say that your home is a workplace or an office if you or your parents seem to always be working from home. I would give you a rubric R4 mark. There is a massive window in front of you as you walk into my bedroom. What I would really like though is some more storage because there is not a lot of space to put my belongings. My walls are plain white with all my pink and blue colours scattered around my room. Overall I give you a 4. The paddock sometimes has sheep in it. I am fond of the fact that it is my own place, and that everything is just right. The Ideas are relevant but I would like to see more elaborated Ideas in the text. In my personal opinion I do love the way my bedroom looks and how it has a theme and a great view! Needs work on the punctuation. It has the swirls because it gives the texture a bit more kick when you look at it and because my gran & Gran dad liked it that way. Personally I love my bedroom. At the end of the bed lies a fluffy pink mat that is placed directly in front of my built in wardrobe, where other pieces of clothing go. Its there to hold previous achievements and precious keepsakes but I really just use it to hold some certificates that cant find in my bookshelf. My room is the perfect size for all my things and for me and thats how I like it. Lastly is the layout. Her eyes were diamonds. 4-. Well structured very big and descriptive paragraphs. The other side of the room has my single bed crammed in the corner by the door. It is my favourite part of my house because I can do what I like in there, and yet not get disturbed. Jackson's dresser is really new and its still in good condition. The layout and space in my room is the most important thing in my room to me. Thanks for dropping by. Does my room have a theme? Whether it be the theme, the walls, the layout or just your favorite item in it. And the last of my accessories is the bulletin board. Compare your house to somewhere else where you also feel those feelings that you can feel every time you step in your front door whether its relaxation, comfort, escape, or even boredom! For next time you could work on not repeating ideas in each paragraph. I am confused about what self fun is though. When you say your home is a swamp, you usually mean that its messy, dark, and maybe even a little smelly. Most of the ideas are elaborated equally. I think your room is very descriptive James, I think you did a good job on this description. But Im lucky enough to have an en suite attached to my room! My room has a hint of rotten food in it to make sure my sister will stay out and it has smelly clothes all over the floor. Now I am going to move on to my furniture. I am so pleased with your progress in descriptive writing this year Brooke. The delicate carpet instantly warms up my feet. It has all the colours and designs that I love. Writing By Brody Kershaw. There was a couple of spelling mistakes though. A few things to fix up but over all it was good. The size of my room is around 3x4M and is small but very warm to sit in. 4 out of 5. It has two doors, one window that opens slightly and two loud heaters that break the cold silence in the night. You have used some very good descriptive words which fit perfectly into what you were writing about. I'm pleased you like your room Christopher. MY BEDROOM. Then to the right of my wardrobe is my tv cabinet which is a light brown wooden cabinet and it holds the usual tv, PS4 and XBOX 360 I'd like to see your room Alex because of the rustic theme and colours. It is a square shape with a little rectangle that leads to the door. From my green reading lamp to my dart board, my patterned roman blinds and funky hooks on the wall. Good job, I like how you described your basketball posters. Out my east facing window you can see the black and white calves frolicking through the lush green grass in the paddock and the different coloured cars zooming down Thompsons Track. There is a popular Australian movie called The Castle that uses this metaphor in the title. My favourite was the accessories it was funny. You might walk in and say, Why is my home a Christmas tree? I like my room because it's got enough space for all my stuff like my table for doing homework and my spare bed for if I have any friends come over. I could clearly see your room just by the way you described it. So overall your writing is amazing. My bedroom is exactly the way I like it, there is a chair in the corner which is very comfortable. My half of the bedroom is on the east side of the house, meaning that Im directly in front of one of our three gardens. When you walk into my room you can tell it is mine because my name is on my wardrobe door and my room is the only room in the house that has a blue wall. My accessories are very colourful, my pens and pencils are all kinds of colours. Even though my room hasnt got much in it, my room is the tidiest bedroom there. One the style two how clean it is three my senses and finally my furniture. Messy ,Modern and comforting thats how i would describe my bedroom. I like it because it has all my precious stuff. It is a very modern bedroom, with a tropical theme. I have two windows in my room one facing straight ahead of you as you walk in and the other one above the bed. The carpet is a dark brown colour that is nice and soft. The color of it is a creamy vanilla look but its actually a bright yellow. It's Romeo's line about his inamorata: "Juliet is the sun." my clothes. Another person who might call their home a prison could be someone who feels like theyre sick of being at home on vacation and wants to go back to school. I usually put the feathered ones at the bottom and the cotton ones on the top. Looking a bit further up you can see a sky light, the plastic that covers it from the reflective tube in the attic isnt fastened properly so if somebody slams a door somewhere it vibrates and makes such a commotion. merger arbitrage analyst; the secrets of the With the windows closed it is a musty un-fresh smell and quite hot. My bedroom, is a wonderful room to hangout in. metaphors to describe a bedroom the root operation that is defined as correcting a portion of Another thing I liked is the spelling is very accurate and you described your bedroom well. My king single bed is positioned against the wall with the big square window and next to that is a white bedside table filled with junk that hasnt been used in years! Mabelles Bedroom Description Ano ang pinakamaliit na kontinente sa mundo? This was both literal and metaphorical in the movie Shrek where the ogre Shrek lived in a swamp. MY BEDROOM But the spelling and use of punctuation was needed and also you could use some more descriptive words. I'm impressed with your vocabulary and spelling. I think that all of your Ideas were pretty detailed. He is a untidy Australian Barraband and he is loud with a weird sense of humor some how. Also my bed is a queen which is always made with colorful sheets on It. Very descriptive though - well done! My bed side table is black but my desk is wooden so is are my draws. Check your spelling and punctuation. I really enjoy your description jake I can visualize your bedroom very well. My room is a good place to enjoy yourself. Also there is a lot of sporting equipment scattered around the room. Above my bed, facing a window on the opposite side of the room, is a TV. I wandered towards my bedroom put my hand on the chilled silver handle. What is the time signature of the song Atin Cu Pung Singsing? However some of your paragraphs didn't make any sense. sleeps in my room. Behind the door is a yellow, green and red stacker box with Jacksons toys in it. My miniature dog and cow sculptures sitting on my desk beginning to gather dust. You have had a few rooms in your life and you know how to to make yourself feel at home easily. Before long, the divide between work and home is blurred, and you can even metaphorically call your home a workplace because they appear so similar. George Wareing 8WH. I like the feel, the carpet, my bed and the size of it. It is a square shape and it is warm. This means I get most of the afternoon sun. Tropical, Sporty, Comfy, Tidy and Spacious. You could make some ideas paragraphs a bit longer. There is a slight problem with my room. As the sun beamed into my bedroom, one of my signs began to glisten and reflect the light that was coming through the window. The thing i treasure is my lego bin because it contains my cool creations. Out my window you can see a stand of poplars, some five finger leaf trees and a beige orange rhododendron (type of flower). These are placed where there is one up and one down all along the top of the wall. I really liked that you had some really awesome words in your writing that really hooked me in and made it more intresting to keep on reading along. A normal room for a 13 year old. Around the neck itself I keep my karate belts, white, orange, yellow and purple. My bedroom (extended metaphor) My bedroom is a forest, heaps of clothes scattered on the My bedside table is cream with a draw that is woven and basket like. As you enter my bedroom the first thing you see is the large divider that sits in the middle of my room separating my sister and I. I hope you have had a virtual journey of what my bedroom looks like, have been taken through a story of my bedroom and know why I like my bedroom. This makes our room one of the darkest rooms in our house. The carpet is a soft grey colour with a squishy texture. I love the way in which you used senses, This is great. Now, were talking about the place of work starting to feel like youre home because youre there so much. I like my room the way it is because I love the view and how it is laid out. But it was good. The crossword clue possible answer is available in 3 letters. LEARNING WITH MRS STAPLES@ MT HUTT COLLEGE, METHVEN. There a couple of small spelling mistakes, but other than that, it is well done. Ano ang mga kasabihan sa sa aking kababata? I like the way you've used a lot of punctuation in your writing with full stops used correctly, spacing after a comma and capital letters after full stops. Most of my books are stacked up into one of my cubby hole shelves. You described your bedroom very well, but I feel your punctuation let you down a bit. I think some of your sentences were a bit long and could have benefited from some more commas, but I think your punctuation has improved. On the other side of my bed there is a desk which is blue and has glass as its main part. 4-. Great detail in your paragraphs Jessie. Maybe expand on some of these so we know more detail eg: what type of animals can you hear? You can see my chook shed and the house paddock with a woolshed at the back of it. My desk Accessories are cool , funky and a little bit expensive but all of these different accessories just add to make my bed room mine. Brown that stands out because of the shine. Your writing was amazing and I didn't find any spelling mistakes. I do everything in my room, im pretty much always in there. September 2014. and at night when it's extremely cold I turn on my speedy heating friend my electric blanket and snuggle right down into my black and white duvet and my purple fluffy sheets. Most times I just laugh because sometimes he is just plain old stupid. Maybe because it has two duvets on it and the sun is shining on it. Very well written. All my shiny medals from past sporting events and competitions hang next to my wardrobe. Im Chris and I run this website a resource about symbolism, metaphors, idioms, and a whole lot more! Opposite my window is my cupboard. Sometimes I don't even have enough space to use my massive laptop because all my pens and books and rubbish are in the way.I need to give it a good clean. But besides from that it is an awesome room and I love it. My bedroom, a place of comfort and rest. My room has lots of colour in it. The colours in your room must be very bright with the sun on it and I can visualise your room. Along one wall has the three dressers. Their should be a comma after hallway in the first sentence, and I am also confused on why in your last paragraph you started off with firstly. They are happy to enjoy the predictable lives they have, rather than search for an exciting purpose in their existence. Jackson enjoys sharing a room with you. Two walls are a normal bland cream, but the other walls are a bright tropical turquoise, But it surprisingly works! People say their home I liked it how you said you wouldn't change your room and it is a good space to relax. All Rights Reserved. oh lick that creamy cock, Below you will understand what is important, the idea provides one of the links with an exciting site: . I like black and white because it doesn't make the room feel too bright and the way it is placed and I like it that way. Overall I think my room is an amazing space and deserves a lot more love and cleaning to keep it in peak condition. I like my bedroom just the way it is. Your story was very descriptive and had good describing words. There is clothes such as shirts and shorts mixed in with stuffed toys and shoes. Layout in my room is great I really like it. Your descriptive writing has a 'quirky' sense of humour in it showing good 'personal voice'. Feedback - It's good that you have the nouns and you have a bit of detail in them but add more. A few more sensory descriptions of your room maybe but we would happily rate you 4+. The bedside table is filled with tangled plugs, wires and even a pringles can. It sounds like the perfect place to go after school or work and feel comfortable and relaxed. The reader doesn't know what you mean, but overall its very good. I am glad you love your bedroom! You describe it well. I look towards the mountain it is covered with the blinding white snow. I feel happy and comfortable in my bedroom, I wouldnt change my room but I wouldnt mind a double bed though. You described your bedroom well. R5. My grandma gave it to me, she loves tigers. There is also a built in wardrobe on the opposite wall to the window, above it there is a picture of a mint green kombi van. And I would try and keep it a bit more tidy! Although I dont really like the blue on my walls and the colour of my floor so itd be good if that could have a change. It has a very comfy mattress and white sheets. My black guitar leans up against my drawers and on top of my drawers there is an orange word that says Brave. When I sit in bed with my eyes peeking out of my blanket it makes me wonder if something scary is hiding behind the box. In my room there are lots of clothes and stuff on the floor my room is very messy, and it is hard to get around without stepping on something if I want to do something in it I have to clean it, also on hot days it can be very hot and sometimes it can be really cold when it is rainy and windy. When I walk into my room all I can smell is dirty sweaty clothes. Now, the layout. What my theme is. But on the drawer top is a bit of mess, it holds my phone, a book, ipod and my lamp and behind my bed on my wall I have some posters. With boxes on top and a big space where it looks with one box is missing. The blankets on my bed are very colourful there is a bright red, white and grey striped blanket, a soft pink one and a plain white one. Next to my bed is a brown wooden three drawer bedside cabinet which has edges that have been chewed on by dogs. The rooms style of the room is old rugged modern and not really cared about but that's what makes it mine. It is sunny and bright, and shows off my disposition. You have made a great job of describing your room and I liked honesty with regards to your (constantly) unmade bed. Megan your vocab was very good with describing things. My animal sketches hanging on my wall and blowing in a winter breeze were only done in black and white. My room is very minimalistic because of the black and white design. He is a pig. But you made a lot of punctuation mistakes and spelling mistakes. I suck creamy cock. Williams Bedroom Description I noticed that one word keep coming up wrong, it was colour. you could add more expression in your writing next time. If you are 13 years old when were you born? Its a big room, but when shared and halved, the stomping grounds are rather small, which also means little mess in little space looks like big mess. I go in, close my eyes, breathe deep, and the world goes away. Above my bed are decorations and then across from my bed there is my creamy white set of draws. squishy, soft, lumps and bumps. Remember to carefully proof-read and edit your work. Well Done Jakey Muss x. KADENS BEDROOM Although this also gets used by my sister who also But at one point you said in your accessories paragraph "But they aren't dirty they are actually quite clean all thanks to my dog." Overall I think my bedroom is nice and comfy, and I like it the way it is. It has a big messy double bed thats cosy and warm with lots of different rugs on the floor. This was very well edited so there is not to much to say you have done a very good job with very little mistakes. Im at home in the forest uses those associations we have of home (comfort, relaxation) and apply them to the outdoors. Not always that bad because your mother gets sick of it and cleans it up a bit!!!!!!!!! In my room I have my school bags. good work. My tv is sitting in the corner of the room but is easy to see because of the size, it is 39 inches and cool looking. Your punctuation is also correct, and I didn't see any wrong. Cleanliness is key for a happy mum. like how you have used brackets. Now to the TV, it's too big! Well in my room I don't have that much furniture but I am going to tell you what I do have. Its a good description of your room but could be a little bit better because of the spelling grammer. You also need to double check that your sentences making sense. Very poor punctuation and vocabulary, sometimes it was very hard to follow what you where saying. Probably you will see my bed first it's right under my window right in the center in my room. (My hands feel very cold.) In my room I have a cactus and a succulent plant on my bedside table. I wouldn't change anything about it even if I had the choice. 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